Vascilic Toyamato

Name:Vascilic Toyamata
Age:11
Homeplanet:Bespin
Race:Human

Appearance(Description):Blonde hair,With a Red outter shirt and inside black shirt.

Force Alignment and rank:A force Sensitive boy/Neutral

History:Vascillic was a 8 years old little boy,Who lived peacefully with his parents,. As time pass,His parent walked out thier house,as Vascilic was asleep,Once they stepped out they saw a bounty hunter. He had two pistols The Bounty hunter dropped one,So his dad grabbed the pistol and pointed it at the bounty hunter.As the bounty hunter did the same to them and then.They shot eachother the same time,but.His mom was behind the dad,so they both got shot,and so did the bounty hunter,This kid walked out seeing the corpse,Then cried.So He had nothing to do,but to Burry his parents underground,As he does so he lives in his parents house as he reached the age of 11 he Was bored,living there so he decided to Explore bespin,And hang out the cantinas.

A decent story, you could use some help with your grammar, but I can help with that, so approved by me.

Approved, moving