Memoir of Valas Corpus (Possible rank up to JM?)

This memoir will explain what happened during all the time I rped with him.

First Memoir:
Valas Corpus, a 25 year old Jedi Knight had gotten his first apprentice. A young Jedi Padawan who was involved in a Sith incident, named Shinji Zorro. But this was short lived, as his Padawan left him to go on to other masters and train under others. After this brief training with Shinji, Valas went to train on the Planet of Ilum, where he perfected his lightsaber combat skills. But tragedy struck as now Ex-Sith Lord Mavra Xav attacked and kidnapped Valas. He was taken to Ziost (Not the last time) and tortured by a Sith Lord named Tensa Horro. Tensa wanting a spy among the Jedi, placed a curse on him using Sith Alchemy. If he were to expose Tensa, Valas would be consumed by darkside energies. But soon this proved futile, as Tensa was killed off. This lifted the curse from Valas, allowing him to be free once more.

Second Memoir: Battle at Ilum

Soon after he recovered, Valas returned to Ilum to complete his training. He was there for several months, practicing saber combat techniques, force techniques and building his endurance in the rigorous mountains of Ilum. But again Valas was attacked, this time by a group of Bounty Hunters who were looking through the caves of Ilum, capturing any Jedi they found. He was attacked and captured by the group of Hunters and taken to Ziost again.

Third Memoir: Ziost

Valas's return to Ziost signaled a great time of distress for him. Not only was he captured by the Bounty hunter squad, but he was brutally beaten and tortured by Sith. He was kept, locked in a confined space in the Sith jails for about a few weeks when he was discovered by a man, Rick Terras. Rick did what he could to help him, talking to him in his incarceration. On this same day, an Ex Sith Vizier, Vaiso Rem came in and infiltrated the academy. He freed several Jedi POW including Valas, making up the story that Lord Valus has scheduled them all for execution. Valas's days of torture were over, and he returned to the temple on Coruscant.

Forth Memoir: New beggining

Valas now 29, upon returning the the academy was scheduled to teach a class of Initiates. This is where he met his Padawan, Inoss Trance. He confronted Inoss, and aspiring Jedi Guardian who wished to learn the deeper mysteries of the force. Valas took him as his apprentice, teaching him basic Jedi skills before going off on his first "Easy" mission in awhile. He later found this mission to be a problem. They were instructed to capture a force user that had affiliated herself with a supposed Sith Lord. The mission went awry as the "Sith Lord" Rick Terras attacked them, defending the woman. Him and his Padawan were defeated by the Lord and returned to the Academy. Wanting to better himself he consulted the council about learning the ways of the Jedi Master. He is currently being judged to see if he is worthy of such titles.

Sorry you were never put through the Master trials dude, so, you're gonna be given master rank, due to the stuff your char has been through, And may even be put on the council but thats not my decision

Well, will the jedi council members say you're good to go, you got it(Fallen) lol, only JC we got since javon gotk illed..